G324: Rough Cut 3 Feedback Analysis

We were really happy with the feedback we received for our 3rd rough cut because we had put in a lot of effort to try and get it all to work and fit some more shots in. We were very happy with all of the positive feedback that we received. With the negative feedback we know how we are going to solve the problems that were mentioned in the feedback and the fixes will be incorporated into the final cut.

The first thing that was pointed out to us was that the camera was shaky in some shots. We will rectify this by re-filming the shots that are shaky.

The second thing that was brought up  was that the TV should actually turn on. We will try and experiment with this and see how it looks. We may implement it or we may not.

The third thing that was mentioned was that some people though that the flashback at the end should have been sped up. We will experiment with this and so how it goes. It was also mentioned to us that we should use some more, shorter shots in our flashback sequence at the end. We will be going out to re-film some shots and whilst we are doing this we will film some additional shots to go into this sequence allowing the others to become shorter.

The forth thing that was pointed out was that some shots are out of focus. We will rectify this by re-filming the shots that are out of focus.

The fifth thing that was pointed out was that some shots are too long. We will fix this by filming some additional shots and re-filming the shots that are too long.

The sixth issue that was pointed out was that the gaps with no footage need to be filled. We know this and we are going to have to re-film this missing footage as it has not transferred across to the editing software.

The tenth thing that was brought up was that it is unclear why the man is climbing through the window. We will make this clearer by adding a shot of the woman locking the door.

The final thing that was mentioned was that some of the shots are a bit wobbly. We will be going out to re-film these shots to fix the problem.

Connor Nagle